‘It is the job of governments and companies to deal with the huge environmental problems which we face. Individuals on their own can do little or nothing’. What is your opinion about this statement?

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One of the major
issue
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which
society
are facing is related to the surroundings. While it is said that government and companies should have whole responsibilities to deal with
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, it is unlikely to claim that each individual does not have anything to do for these .
This
essay will discuss why there is a need for coordination of
both
individuals as well as responsible authorities and strict regulation from the
ministry
to tackle the environmental issues. In order to manage the environmental complication the authority requires a bond with the crowd of the
society
.Many countries could not implement the vision of
a safe surroundings
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because
public
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are
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not following the
ministry
.In the case of plastic use ,
for example
, it is far away from the control of the government ,since it can not be possible by a state itself to eradicate plastic from the
society
,
community
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also
should take initiativeness.
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,there
are
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enormous
complication
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which
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need
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both
authorities and
population
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have
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equal responsibilities to get rid of the dilemma like fuel consumption and water stagnate. For these reasons , not only the companies but
also
the
society
work together for a healthy setting.
Moreover
,it is the responsibility of the authority to effect some stringent
law
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and regulations to save the naturality of our habitat . It is not to make the life of the population difficult but to protect nature.
For example
,
community
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should follow each governmental restriction to fulfil the country's dream of
a
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safe habitat.
Furthermore
,
ministry
provide
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awareness to
community
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regarding the guideline and regulations
then
they can easily follow it.
Hence
, it is said that
both
crowd and state have equal responsibilities on environmental safety. In conclusion, there is no fact in claiming that whether only
ministry
or companies ,not the
society
have a major role in the environmental issues.
This
essay clearly proved that cooperation and coordination from
both
nation and responsible authorities as well as the strict order and regulations could play an important role in environmental trouble.
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