Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology . In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?
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the modern
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technology
. However
, it has both positive and negative impact
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both
sides and I believe that the advantage of Correct quantifier usage
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this
change outweigh
the drawbacks.
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outweighs
Technology
has had an impact in different
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a different
way
on relationships in business, education and social life. Fix the agreement mistake
ways
First
and foremost , nowadays people
can run their business in different countries through the internet without any face
to face
interaction. Secondly
, there are many apps like skey
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relationship
between students and teachers, Add an article
a relationship
For example
, one of my relatives who is involved in teaching
profession is teaching a few chine’s students via zoom .
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the teaching
Finally
, some people
use social
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the social
a social
network
for making friends and find Fix the agreement mistake
networks
people
to share common
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a common
interest
and they prefer to interact through their devices Fix the agreement mistake
interests
such
as laptop
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laptops
smart phone
etc.
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smartphone
However
, these development
can be extremely positive .Change the determiner
this development
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To
people
was not easy when written letter or telegrams were only
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option
. At present, interact with Change the noun form
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people
of any countries
via email, Fix the agreement mistake
country
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facebook
most
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Besides
these, technology
create
a great opportunity to interact with Change the verb form
creates
a
between seller and buyer through social media . Correct article usage
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For instance
, from anywhere of the country or foreign shopkeeper is showing their product via live video and face book
and consumer order Correct your spelling
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according
their choice .
In spite of that having so many benefits , there are some drawbacks. Add the preposition
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Technology
is the major reason for discouraging real interaction to
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with
people
. The bonding of soul
decreases in every Correct article usage
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relationships
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relationship
For instance
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, it has a huge impact an
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on
people
’s privacy.
In conclusion, I would like to say these are positive developments . There are many disadvantage
yet but the advantages greatly outweigh the disadvantages.Change to a plural noun
disadvantages
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