Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology . In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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has brought tremendous changes
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everywhere. One of the fields where undoubtedly has seen a
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nature of interpersonal communication due to advancement in
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.
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, it has both positive and negative
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on the relationship.
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essay we will discuss positive and negative
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sides and I believe that the advantage of
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the drawbacks.
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has had an impact in
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way
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on relationships in business, education and social life.
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and foremost , nowadays
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can run their business in different countries through the internet without any
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to
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interaction.
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, there are many apps like
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pe , Zoom, Google meet are giving new premises for creating
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between students and teachers,
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, one of my relatives who is involved in
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profession is teaching a few chine’s students via zoom .
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, some
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use
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the social
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network
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networks
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for making friends and find
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to share
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interest
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interests
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and they prefer to interact through their devices
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as
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laptops
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,
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etc.
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,
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can be extremely positive .
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communicate between different country’s
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was not easy when written letter or telegrams were
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option
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. At present, interact with
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of any
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via email,
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face book
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is
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easiest .
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these,
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create
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a great opportunity to interact with
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between seller and buyer through social media .
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, from anywhere of the country or foreign shopkeeper is showing their product via live video and
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and consumer order
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their choice . In spite of that having so many benefits , there are some drawbacks.
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is the major reason for discouraging real interaction
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people
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. The bonding of
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decreases in every
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.
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, I am saying from my personal ,sometimes my daughter texts me from her room for sharing her joy and pain .
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, it has a huge impact
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people
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’s privacy. In conclusion, I would like to say these are positive developments . There are many
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yet but the advantages greatly outweigh the disadvantages.
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