In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent decades , being
overwieght
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overweight

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has become a major problem in several countries while
,
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apply

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it can be seen that more and more
people
are becoming unhealthy and less
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happening has brought some problems into humans lives which can be solved throw different solutions . The main cause of
this
issue is
a
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sedentray
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sedentary

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lifestyle of
current
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the current

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generation .As
teachnology
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technology

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dominated our lives , and all the tasks are
computrized
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computerized

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or they can be done by the internet
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briskly

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as
a
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result most
people
do all of their tasks online so that they are not active enough .
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, there
is
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some online grocery shops available ,so
vast
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the vast

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majority of
people
will order their
housholds
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households
household

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staff which
is do
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time-saving . Another reason is
widespread
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of fast
foods
.Due to the hectic
lifesyle
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lifestyle

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everyones have , canned
foods
, frozen
foods
and fast
foods
have become so
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ubiquitous

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amongst
people
.
This
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types of food are so high -fat and harmful so they can lead to cardiovascular disease . One of the most effective solutions to overcome
to
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apply

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this
problem would be free membership of gyms . If the government makes a plan to give the citizens membership of
sport
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sports

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clubs they will not be
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concerned

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about the price and it can make them more
enthiousiastic
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enthusiastic

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to do exercise on
a
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apply

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regular
baises
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basis
biases

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lastly
, the more gyms and fitness clubs
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available , the more residents will use that .
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, big companies can have a little gym on the top of their
biuldings
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buildings
building

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,so their employees would use that before and after their work time . In conclusion , the more
people
become
overwight
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overweight

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, the less they do activities and it leads to
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in a harmful condition which is a controversial issue of
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today's world . The
govenments
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governments

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and the
people
should be aware of the causes of that and try to tackle that if they want to have a healthy body .
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