death penality is best way to control and reduce serious crime to what extent do you agree or disagree?

The dynamics of
occuring
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occurring
crime
have been changed rampantly over the years. some folks
beleive
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believe
that capital
punishment
is
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way to bring down
crime
rates.
however
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believe that death sentences are not fruitful in minimizing
crime
,
violeneces
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violence
and other
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. over the past period of
time
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the rate of
crime
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been increased in developing as well as in developed nations.
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reason for
this
detrimental effect is
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unemployement
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unemployment
. people are unemployed as they have more time to think or to made
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for crimes to earn good money in
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period of time.
for
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a labourer who
work
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on daily wages could not fulfil the dreams of his family like providing education to his infants in prosperous
instituions
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institutions
, going for dinner in rich class hotels, big house or luxuries life.
as a result
just to live
this
type of life they just did
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crime
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for their families. so for these
type
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of
cases
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death
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penality
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is a very big
punishment
for them because
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giving capital
punisments
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punishment
punishments
to them will have
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effect on their back families.
However
, I believe that capital
punishment
is necessary
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society.
Firstly
, it is
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effective to stop major crimes. The best method to prevent a person from committing
crime
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a crime
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is to show the consequences of his or her actions.
For example
, the government of Pakistan has controlled the rate of terrorism by enforcing death penalties for the members of terrorist organisations.
Secondly
, the governments spend large sums of
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budget on
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of prisoners.
Instead
,
this
money can be used for the development of the society and welfare of the people. To sum up,
although
capital
punishment
has some disadvantages, I think that it proves to be the best way of controlling criminals, lessening governmental expenses and preventing other people from doing crimes.
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