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City and local governments should provide community-wide free Wi-Fi. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#city #governments #community-wide #wi-fi
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In recent years more and more
people
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 have been using smartphones to communicate and laptops to work outside of the office. Some
people
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 may think that community-wide
Wi-Fi
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 will be beneficial for everyone and should be provided for free by municipal governments, whereas others may think tax money should not be spent on
Wi-Fi
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. I personally believe that it is beneficial for local governments to provide community-wide
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 if
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 a measure is implemented wisely.
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 of all,
Wi-Fi
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 has become part of the basic infrastructure in today’s world. Today, it is very common for
people
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 to use smartphones all the time to communicate online or to carry laptops to a café or a park to work or study. They need their phones and PCs to be connected to the Internet, and in that sense,
Wi-Fi
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 serves as the infrastructure in the same way as roads or electricity does.
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, free
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 is convenient not only for local
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 but
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 for
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 from out of town or foreign countries. According to some statistics, many foreigners who come to Japan, my country, find the country’s poor
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 availability very inconvenient. I wish we had free
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 nationwide and could make their stay in Japan more pleasant.
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, some may think community-wide free
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 might not be a good idea. Installing a network of high-speed
Wi-Fi
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 will cost a great deal of money.
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 who already have access to the Internet at home may say, “why
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 our tax money to pay for others?”
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, if
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 coming from out of town find staying in the community comfortable because of easy access to the Internet, it will benefit businesses there and, in the end, the whole community. In sum,
Wi-Fi
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 can be considered an integral part of the infrastructure and if communities provide it for free, it will benefit the local community.
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, the upsides of
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 a policy will outweigh the downsides.
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