International tourism have brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is a concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

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tourism

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brings huge profits to

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of tourist places which carriers with it environmental issues

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local flora ,

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fauna

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impacts of

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sometimes

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the economic interests ,and I will discuss

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florishing

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towards the places of natural history, scenery and

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holiday destinations and governments of concerned countries are keep promoting these events

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to bring maximum economic benefit to the places.

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lots of pressure on local communities and they become overcrowded during holiday seasons which in turn puts lots of demand for local resources of water ,heat and electricity .For to catch up with

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overwhelming demand local municipalities overusing available resources or they will be redirected to

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those

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requirements.

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development negatively

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farming , fishing and other business

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where

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supply of people and resources. Pollution from vehicles and noise negatively impacts local animals and birds

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in those remote areas. Woods cutdown for development will reduce some special of trees and plants part by

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eventually they extinct from

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environment. Pollution of trash and plastic

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tourist

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greatest

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impact. So

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environmental harm done by

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industry is more than economic benefits so government should formulate strict rules regarding the visiting those hot destination to balance the account.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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