you recenty attended a training course for your work. your employer has asked you for the feedback on the training course. write a letter to your employer. in the letter remind your employer what the course was about explain why the course was useful to you in your work suggest why the course may not be suigtabe for some of your other colleagues

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Dear Sir, I am writing to express my gratitude for conducting the training of Digital marketing course and I must say that it is highly beneficial for me and my department. I hope you remember

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month at the start, you organized a workshop for a week where you called all the team members of the social media marketing and offline marketing department. In the workshop, you explained the details of how we should find the right audience to enhance our business

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the correct platforms we need to use to get better results. The course actually assisted me a lot as

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, I have applied the same with one department so that we can do experiments. I am delighted to inform you that with the techniques we have gathered 2 weeks of data in just 2 days and that too the prospective contacts. Not only the data but we have generated good revenue as well. The knowledge you shared was excellent

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I feel that sharing

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information can be confusing for the offline marketing team as they can easily target the audience in the fields. It is very rare that offline teams use the internet to make changes in the audience, they are more

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on educational institutes only. I am looking forward to more

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courses to accelerate my skills. Yours faithfully, Gurleen

kaur

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bajwagurleen02Mon Oct 21 2024

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coherence and cohesion

Try to break information into clear paragraphs, making it easier for the reader to follow the flow of ideas. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea.

task response

Clarify any technical or ambiguous parts of the content for readers who might not be familiar with the training or the industry jargon.

coherence and cohesion

The response is well-structured with a clear purpose in each paragraph, addressing the task requirements effectively.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is polite and professional, suitable for a workplace setting.

task achievement

The letter gives specific examples of how the training was beneficial in practical terms, demonstrating a good understanding of the task.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

229 words

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