In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In the future, all vehicles will be developed or replaced with
driverless
automobiles. Passengers will be the only human who sitting inside them. I totally believe that those
driverless
cars
going to make the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. On the negative way,
driverless
vehicles can lead to large unemployment losses.
For example
, the drivers' lives depend on transport customers from
place
to
place
and received money from that as a work.
Thus
, it is undeniable that human drivers will be replaced by those
driverless
vehicles, and
also
people
have to find new careers with automated
cars
.
However
, I think drivers can avoid being unemployed by learning and reskill for working in another part
instead
. On the positive hand,
driverless
cars
had been manufactured to support human's convenience in life, especially for
people
with disabilities.
This
is because
people
with disabilities cannot move or travel comfortably from one
place
to another
place
such
as for vacation in a different province while sitting inside the
driverless
automobiles,
people
can do other activities as well because they do not have to focus on driving all the way.
For example
, taking pictures, reading books, or using a mobile phone is
also
legal. I do think that
this
is just one of the advantages that
driverless
cars
can give us because humans always craft some things to make our life better. In conclusion,
although
driverless
automobiles will make
people
lose their job from being the driver, it
also
can give other
people
more advantage than they could imagine they can do
such
as give the
people
with disabilities a chance to travel on their own with no worries.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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