You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter •Say where you think you left the papers •Explain why they are so important •Tell the manager what you want him /her to do

Dear Sir or Madam I am Mohammadreza Hadavi, and I was one of your guests at the event held earlier today. I am writing

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letter with regard to a problem I am currently facing. When I arrived home, I noticed that I had lost my insurance papers. I believe that I put them on the table located next to the

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window in the conference room. These documents are important, since I must return them to the insurance company in order to deal with them.

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, they contain sensitive personal information, including my personal details and bank account number.

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, I am a bit concerned about someone accessing them. I would be very grateful if you could check the room and keep the papers safe for me. I

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provided my phone number at the top of

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letter. Please do not hesitate to call me if you need more information to help identify them. I really appreciate your assistance in

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matter. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Mohammadreza Hadavi

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Aug 2, 2025

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Consider adding a brief introduction about the meeting to give context.

coherence and cohesion

Try to use more linking words to connect ideas better.

coherence and cohesion

Make sure every paragraph focuses on one main idea for clarity.

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You clearly stated where you left the papers and their importance.

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You maintained a polite tone throughout the letter, which is very suitable.

coherence and cohesion

The letter's greeting and closing were appropriate and formal.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

176 words

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