You recently went to see a good play at a theatre, but you did not enjoy it because of some problems in the theatre. Write a letter to the manager of the theatre. In your letter: say which play you saw and when describe the problems you experienced in the theatre suggest what the manager should do
Dear Mr. Holmes,
My name is Petr and I visited your theatre
last
night. I visited the game
which was named King Arthur. Unfortunately
I want you to describe my bad experience in your theatre.
The show should start around 9pm but the Add a comma
Unfortunately,
game
itself started around 9:45pm. I was very surprised at how long the foreplay lasted. In conclusion, I left your theatre around midnight and I had big trouble finding my transportation.
Next time I would rather inform people about the late start of the game
because people can manage their transportation after the game
finished. For instance
, if the show starts at 9:45 please let people know.
Thank youSubmitted by andrea.kroupova on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph covers one main idea to enhance coherence. Although the letter is generally clear, refining the structure could improve readability.
task achievement
Consider using more formal and precise language. For example, instead of 'the game which was named King Arthur,' you could say 'the play titled King Arthur.' Additionally, 'foreplay' was likely meant to be 'delay' or 'prelude.'
task achievement
You have included all the necessary information in your letter, addressing which play you saw, the problems you encountered, and suggesting a solution.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of your letter are appropriate and courteous.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!