Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, it is common to see people getting updates about
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from the internet rather than the traditional way of reading a printed
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. I will agree that electronic sources of
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will gradually replace that of the
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.
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remain an important
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of
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for ample reasons.
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, the older generation still
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to read their
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way, because they have traditionally bought a
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over the years and
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do not want to change or simply they are not aware of how to use the latest technology.
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to
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a
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also
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comes with other supplements like magazines, television guides and many more. Even, they give
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of entertainment
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as crosswords, which makes it more attractive than
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of
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.
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, though
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may not disappear completely, the internet is likely to become
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convenient
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of
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in recent
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times
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.
Firstly
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, younger people tend to read the
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online and prefer not to pay for it, so the older generation reading
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will gradually decline.
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, media companies start to see a drop in income from
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a newspaper
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newspaper
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newspapers
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which become unprofitable and they will
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to find alternatives to make
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with the help of
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broadcast online. Another reason is that it is
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an environment
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environment
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friendly
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as there is no need
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paper, which can reduce deforestation
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and save our precious environment. It
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also
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portable
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source
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of
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, which can save
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time of people. To exemplify, a person can read online
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on
mobile
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a mobile
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phone while commuting to
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in
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bus or train. In conclusion,
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newspapers
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remain popular nowadays, they will gradually be replaced by
the
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electronic sources of
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.
This
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may be a loss given to history, but it is unavoidable development for our society.
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