Write to the company’s manager about construction near your home. In your letter: * how you heard of their construction plans * what you think of their plans * your hopes for the construction in case it pushes through

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Dear Sir, Happy Tuesday! Hope

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letter finds you well and in good spirits. I am writing

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letter to express my concern regarding your construction plan near our residential areas. Yesterday, I was reading a local newspaper where you published that you are planning to build a supermarket in our area for the development and the growth of our community. Undoubtedly, your plan is good enough but it will definitely affect the lives of society members

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as more noise pollution and traffic congestion will disrupt their lives. Most of the students choose our peaceful area for study in a better way and constructing a new site there will divert their minds and automatically, they will lose their concentration for getting better grades. I think you have to emphasise the importance of community members and should involve them in the discussions where you will get their opinions and

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you can express your desire for the improvement of the neighbourhood. I hope you will consider my suggestions worthy. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Sam

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coherence and cohesion

While your letter has a clear structure, ensure that each paragraph is distinctly focused on a single idea to enhance readability.

task achievement

Expanding on the consequences of construction in more detail could strengthen your argument and provide more depth to your response.

greeting and closing

Your polite greeting and closing enhance the overall tone of the letter, making it respectful and appropriate.

task achievement

You effectively introduced your concern, making your main point clear from the beginning.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

180 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

construction
plans
concerns
infrastructure
community
facilities
disruption
pollution
traffic congestion
improvements
property value
neighborhood
engagement
feedback
outcome
opportunities
local news
community meetings
residence
wildlife

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Write to the company’s manager about construction near your home. In your letter: * how you heard of their construction plans * what you think of their plans * your hopes for the construction in case it pushes through

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

It is important for cities and towns to have large outdoor public spaces such as parks. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

You had borrowed money from your friend when you were facing some financial problems and forgot to pay it back. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter: ● apologize for being late in returning the money ● explain what happened ● say how you are going to fix the issue now

Ielts Simon: Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents, who are choosing to educate children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do the advantages of home education outweigh the disadvantages?

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter •explain the reasons for the noise •apologise •describe what action you will take