In many countries plastic bags are the main source of rubbish, causing pollution on land and in the water, so many people think they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The polluting effects of
plastic
are often featured in the news these days. We have realised how damaging
plastic
can be and there is a strong public reaction in favour of reducing
plastic
waste. Banning
plastic
bags
would be one way of dealing with the problem.
However
, in my
opinion
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there are other, more effective, strategies that could be implemented, targeting not only consumers but
also
the manufacturers and retailers of
plastic
products. The main problem with
plastic
bags
is that they take many years to decompose and are often only used only once for convenience and
then
discarded, ending up in rivers and seas where they cause particular harm to marine creatures
such
as whales and turtles. The obvious response might be to ban
plastic
bags
. If shops stopped supplying them, customers would be forced to re-use existing
bags
or find other ways of carrying their shopping.
This
has had a great deal of success in many countries. But
this
ban should extend to all
plastic
which
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is used in packaging, much of which is unnecessary. Fruits and vegetables,
for example
, have their own natural covering and do not need a
further
layer of
plastic
. While banning
plastic
bags
would be beneficial,
this
measure would not be enough to solve the problem. People
also
need educating about littering and recycling in general. Many people still do not dispose of
plastic
properly and
as a result
, even if less
plastic
is produced, much of what is in existence finds its way into the natural environment. Heavy fines should be introduced for those who do not respect the laws regarding the protection of the environment. In conclusion, the required approach should be to both
limit
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the production and use of
plastic
and
also
to
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ensure that people understand the impact that it can have on the environment if
plastic
is not correctly managed.
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