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Each country censors the media in one way or the other. What are the pros and cons of censorship in the media?

#country #censors #media #censorship
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 there is the formation of a governing body known as the censor board that has a stringent hold on means of mass communication. There are both advantages and disadvantages of
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, the main merit of censorship is that material broadcasted on several platforms
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 as television, internet, radio is primarily reviewed by the committee.
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, it ensures the quality of content prior to its release.
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, adult content or misleading information is eliminated from the data.
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, the censor committee ensures that facts and figures broadcasted should not engross a particular caste or religion .
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, a film based on queen Padmavati which might lead to disturbance of tranquillity due to some inaccurate information in several states of India was sorted by
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, the role of censorship is pivotal in maintaining peace and harmony among citizens.
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, the downside is that
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 do not have complete freedom to raise their voice against social menaces. Indeed, most of the cases of misdeeds are executed by influential people. Ergo, to remain in the good books of the public, the reality is cut sort by
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 body or in either way complete information is not shown. Another negative side is that the
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business
 of
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 in today’s scenario is evidently witnessed. To illustrate, the evidence supporting the Panorama scam is put down by
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 in a smarter way to save the renowned celebrities, politicians, business tycoons.
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, on the darker ,side the independence of
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 remains in the fist of some people. In compendium, standard assurance, as well as maintenance of communal harmony, is one of the significant benefits while irrefutable facts are hidden or cut sort which is somewhere ethically inappropriate.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Misinformation
  • Sensitive information
  • Harmful content
  • Cultural values
  • National security
  • Freedom of expression
  • Government propaganda
  • Accountability
  • Dissenting voices
  • Manipulate public opinion
  • Censorship
  • Media regulation
  • Transparency
  • Ethical standards
  • Propaganda
  • Civic liberties
  • Bias
  • Democracy
  • Media outlets
  • Information flow
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