Nuclear technology should be used for constructive purposes. Do you agree or disagree?

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large
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number of
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benefits
of Nuclear
technology
. It can be used either in an
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appropriate
or hazardous manner.
However
, I believe that it must be used
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betterment of the earth and human life.
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Nuclear
technology
in
food
irradiation, a process in which
food
can be preserved and kept for
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period of time, kills the
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microorganism
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microorganisms
and prevent
food
from insects. If there was no nuclear
technology
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industry,
for instance
, a large
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amount
of
food
would go to waste
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.
Hence
, I believe that ionizing
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food
products is a constructive way of using nuclear
technology
. It is
also
used in
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care sector. A very small amount of radioactive material is used to check the internal body organs and structure. These technologies have made it easier to diagnose a problem before they become fatal.
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bleeding in the brain, doctors can take action and prevent
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death by escalating the problem and taking action.
Thus
, these nuclear machines can
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lives.
Nevertheless
, these sources are
also
being used in a disastrous manner.
Increasing
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number of countries now have access to
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nuclear
energy which is used for constructing bombs and
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weapons
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. These weapons can cause
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mass destruction and the radiation
ommited
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through can have long term effect on the species on the earth. Atomic bombs,
for example
, used by
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can kill a large number of people.
Therefore
, it should not be used as it puts the life of every species in danger. In conclusion,
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radiation energy can be used in many forms, construction or destruction. And, I believe that it must be used to make everyday life easier and make the world a better place and not the opposite.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • constructive
  • sustainable
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • electricity generation
  • energy demands
  • cancer treatment
  • radioactive imaging
  • scientific research
  • advancements
  • regulation
  • safety measures
  • accidents
  • misuse
  • waste management
  • radioactive materials
  • responsibly
  • benefits
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