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In the future. nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some people anticipate that printed
newspapers
 or
books
 will be unnecessary things for them in the future because of the replacement of the online platforms especially without paying. From my point of view, I agree with
this
 prediction. In the following paragraphs, the reason to support my agreement will be outlined in detail. Nowadays, most people start their new day by watching or reading reports from a website. They are no need to spend their money to buy
newspapers
. Getting the report becomes easier just by serving the internet. If they want to have more details about the news, they can find a lot of interesting information on the website.
As a result
, it makes users more comfortable with
this
 getting the news. In the field of education, using an iPad or other electronic tools is more popular than using textbooks. Students decide to use an iPad because they think that textbooks are more costly than e-
books
, short for electronic
books
. If they have to buy some papers, e-
books
 will be a more interesting option.
In addition
, some teachers
also
 agree with their opinion. Without using these electronic devices, they had to print a lot of papers for their students and it cost them money.
However
, not every student or teacher can afford them. In conclusion, even though using electronic devices is not happen to everyone yet. It is undeniable that a website more uses than
newspapers
 and
books
 due to its comfort and cost-free use. A mentioned early in the essay, I confidently believe that
newspapers
 and
books
 will disappear in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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