Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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era of "freedom of speech and democracy", restricting knowledge for the sake of vague public security and national importance seems quite irrational to many when others opine that information should be available only when the authority deem them suitable for access. Both parties have their reasons for arguments, and I personally believe that the scientific studies, academic arena, and businesses can be greatly benefitted if all material is made open to them.
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with, sensitive data, that could penetrate state security, lead to public outcry, hand over technologies to terrorists and facilitates corporate monopoly in the trade sector, deserves to be scrutinized before making them public. In
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digital era, the report spread like wildfire and for the sake of maintaining global peace, it should be delimited, according to many.
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, if nuclear technology is shared with all nations for scientific studies, the world will soon stand on the verge of obliteration, despite an inconceivable possibility
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technology possesses to facilitate the citizens.
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, scientific research largely depends on available data and previous discoveries. If valuable information and past findings are not shared openly with academics and researchers, global progress will become standstill.
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, the Internet is probably the most significant invention modern nature has produced and if
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technology had not been shared by the US military, we would still be living in the pre-internet era.
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, the clandestine message has no value if it is not implemented in the real earth and
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curbing them is like slaughtering the potential for progress.
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, world history suggests that the human race has advanced due to discoveries and inventions shared with the earth as each finding went through profound modification and advancement. I
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personally favour the ideology that supports "free instruction for all". In conclusion, the material has limited value when it is curbed and not shared with great minds. For true global progress, restrictions on valuable words should be debarred and let people know the truth
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of keeping them in dark.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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