Some people think that sport teaches children how to compete, while others believe that children learn team work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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it is considered by certain individuals that

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teach students to be competitive, others believe that

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team work

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important to be taught. I believe in my opinion, that

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train a child to work as a

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since it as it helps to achieve a common goal by taking

decision

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a decision

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as a

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and eliminates selfishness On the one hand, some believe that playing

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teaches students to compete at a school level.

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, competing

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other at a young age will help them to motivate themselves to work hard to achieve their objective thereby creating a generation of

children

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who will carry on these traits in their professional life as well.

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,

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events in China are very competitive and teachers start training

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as young as 5 years old since

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is projected during the

Olymics

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Olympics

2020, where China had the most number of gold medal wins.

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, others think that

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promotes

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team

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woking

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working

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skills because

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games,

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football and rugby

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played as a

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where decisions taken by one player will affect the whole

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.

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trains the

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at

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age to think how their decisions will affect others, thereby adapt

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stype

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of thinking when they are older and I agree with

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.

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, playing

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as a

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eliminates being selfish where only one person

take

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credit for winning,

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they consider winning as a

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. In conclusion, it is evident that despite some

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that

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teaches

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children

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to be competitive, I believe it encourages

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working since it helps them to take decisions as a

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and does not promote selfishness when taking credit for their win.