some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in correct place. What is your opinion about this?

Organisation

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is always considered as

one

of the disciplined

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words

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. Many people view

this

particular word as an important factor that helps in attaining success.

Similarly

,

public

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the public

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opines that it is essential to maintain

one

's residing place and work environment clean and tidy. I completely support

this

point of view and would give my justification in the following paragraphs.

Firstly

,

Organised

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an Organised

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person

shows the decorum that he

/

she follows in their daily

life

. They are disciplined and always attains their goals in

life

,

for instance

; People serving in the army

/

navy

/

military

they

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apply

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have

this

aura in them and their lifestyle is a great example of

this

.

Secondly

, Tracking is always possible, when

things

are sorted out. While working in a busy schedule, smart people do make sure to keep track of

things

, which

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in turn

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inturn

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in turn

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shows their organisational skills.

For example

, record keeping or to-do list, which reduces the chances of missing out

anything

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.

Thirdly

, It enables

time saving

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time-saving

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.

Things

kept at a proper place always inject time to do more productive

things

.

This

particular aspect

come

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into use

,

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when

one

is running out of time to do some stuff. Fourthly, It shows the character of the individual.

Cluttered

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A cluttered

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workspace never gives a good impression about a

person

as compared to

a

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exquistively

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exquisitely

oraganised

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organised

workspace.

This

would showcase the world of how a

person

thinks or is actually in his

/

her real

life

.

For instance

, we always feel happy and welcomed in

a clean surroundings

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clean surroundings

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as compared to crowded and misarranged

place

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places

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. To conclude,

this

skill is something which can be gained from

practise

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practice

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and with adopting

this

a

person

can actually

acheive

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achieve

goals in their

life

. Being organised does not only helps in attaining the target but

also

portrays

one

's

demeanor

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demeanour

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.