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Some people believe that traveling is a valuable experience ;others say it is a waste of time and money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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The major part of people believes that the journey around the world gives
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 incredible experience, while another part of people think that it is a loss of time and means.
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 of view and argue in favour of the latter. On the one hand, travelling is an awesome way to shapes the worldview.
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, it can be useful, because of changing your values, mindset, and everything. Thanks to the journey, every person feel a sense of culture shock and self-reflection.
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, trips abroad give the possibility of trying something different and teaching cultural dignity and their importance in society.
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, everyone can read historical journals or look at photos of these places;
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 years ago gives you a valuable understanding
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On the other hand
, despite the benefits, travelling is
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 and time-consuming process. Trip to foreign countries is expensive, considering that the travelling includes food, accommodation, entertainment and other things.
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 of
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 stress, because of booking, analyzing, searching places for accommodation and make all valuable inquiries.
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 the trip will worry and waste time collecting clothes and things. In brief, I personally think that travelling is
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 process in the world, which gives more possibility to learn new things and gain new insights. From my point of view, everyone should try to travel.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • broadens horizons
  • cultural exposure
  • tolerance
  • self-reliance
  • overcoming challenges
  • language proficiency
  • sustainable tourism
  • environmental footprint
  • cultural homogenization
  • commercialization
  • responsible travel
  • global understanding
  • eco-friendly practices
  • accessible alternatives
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