In general, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why is this so, and what can be done to improve contact between neighbours?

Currently is well know that a huge number of
people
spends less time with their
neighbors
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than they used to do in the previous generation. There are a huge variety of motives why it happens.
However
, as far as I am concern two main reasons could explain it. The
first
one is because nowadays
people
are busy with their own lives and the majority of
people
have been living in a huge condominium, like a city, where a thousand
people
live as
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it is extremely difficult to meet each other.
To begin
with, the
first
reason,
people
are extremely busy nowadays if we compare it with the past.
For example
, when I was a child, my mother did not work out of home, and she used to spend all day at home, the same situation happened with our
next
-door
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,
consequently
, they used to make friendship effortless. But unfortunately, today my life is completely different from the life of my mother. I work in an office, and I usually arrived home late every day
thus
I do not have time to meet better who my
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are. To solve situations like that I believe
people
should try to meet their
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as they can help each other in different situations. Another cause for
this
problem is that
people
have been living, here in São Paulo is quite common, in a huge condominium, where, live a plethora of
people
, and most of them had moved after getting married.
As a result
, having a good friendship with their
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is almost impossible. To minimize
this
situation, I believe that the condo should periodically propose, a kind of celebration at the party hall in order to give an opportunity
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neighbors
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meet
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better each other. In conclusion, losing the relationship with
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is a problem since when they have
closer
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relationship
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, they can build a sense of community in that
neighborhood
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. Sometimes,
people
live in different cities of their relatives and
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are the only person who can help them.
However
, a simple change in their daily habits and a bit of effort is the probable solutions to the matter.
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