In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In many parts of the world, there are a

rise

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number of

people

that suffer from poor

health

condition due to excess amount of unhealthy

food

they consumed like fast

food

.

Thus

, the governments need to impose

a

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much strict rules related to

taxation

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the taxation

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of

this

particular

food

. I

totaly

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totally

agree that to prevent

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number of

people

that

negatively

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are negatively

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impacted by

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foods

, they need to be reminded that there

are

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much higher

cost

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to get

this

kind of

foods

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food

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.

Firstly

, one easiest way to stop

people

from getting more unhealthy

food

is by increase the price of the

food

. The reason

behind

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fast

food

is so popular is because

this

food

is affordable compared to other kinds of

food

.

Thus

, make it more expensive by increase the base tax will

automaticaly

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automatically

deter its popularity since

people

now have more variety of

food

in the price range. Another point is that, by increasing the price, in the long run, it will beneficial for the national budget due to the fact that, healthier community obviously reduce the cost of

health

care

of

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a country. A successful country usually

have

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a policy that they will cover the cost of their

citizen

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in terms of

health

problem. If

governments

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able to encourage their population to eat healthy

food

, it will cut down

health

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issues related to unhealthy

food

namely obesity and heart disease.

Therefore

, a big sum of money can be saved in the end

if

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the

health

case

lower

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. In conclusion, to stop

indiviuals

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individuals

having a bad effect of low minerals

foods

, authorities can impose a surge of the tax.

This

policy not only effectively reduce the

consumtion

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consumption

rate of the

foods

, but

also

in the long term it could resulting positive effect

to

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one's country financial.