Do you think it is more important to do things to make other people happy than it is to do things to make yourself happy? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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I lost my valuable wristwatch in between. It was a grey coloured Emporio Armani watch with a blue dial in it. It was the exclusive edition of that kind of article. It has three separate analogues for a minute, seconds and date. Its strap is made up of stainless steel and there is a scratch on the backside of it. I sincerely request you to courier it to me at my registered address, which is there in your records, in case you find that. It would really be a great help to me, as my dad gifted that on my birthday. I am extremely sorry for the inconvenience caused. Yours sincerely Jatin Kochar

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7 paragraphs

155 words

4.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Do you think it is more important to do things to make other people happy than it is to do things to make yourself happy? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

The government pay tution fees for the university students. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Despite better access to education, many adults today still can not read or write. In what ways are they disadvantaged?

Some individuals argue that children should always need the advice given by their parents,while others believe that children should make decisions independently.Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Many people buy products that they do not really need and replace old products with new ones unnecessarily. Why do people buy things they do not really need? Do you think this is a good thing?

In the developed world,average life expectency is increasing.What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.