Do you think it is more important to do things to make other people happy than it is to do things to make yourself happy? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Dear George, I am writing
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letter to inform you that I stayed at your apartment during my family tour from 5th to 10th Sept 2021 in Canada. I booked that homestay through the Goibibo app. It was a pleasant vacation,
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I lost my valuable wristwatch in between. It was a grey coloured Emporio Armani watch with a blue dial in it. It was the exclusive edition of that kind of article. It has three separate analogues for a minute, seconds and date. Its strap is made up of stainless steel and there is a scratch on the backside of it. I sincerely request you to courier it to me at my registered address, which is there in your records, in case you find that. It would really be a great help to me, as my dad gifted that on my birthday. I am extremely sorry for the inconvenience caused. Yours sincerely Jatin Kochar
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  • expertise
  • technology
  • innovative solutions
  • international standards
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  • environmental standards
  • capacity
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