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Farming is the backbone of every country but nowadays many youngsters hesitate to enter in this profession. Why is this the case and what can be done to avoid it?

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Farming is an essential industry in all nations,
however
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 modern generations don’t seem interested in
this
 occupation.
This
 is likely because working on a farm is an extremely physically demanding job.
However
, governments might be able to encourage young
people
 to become
farmers
 by creating financial incentives. The main reason that farming is losing popularity among youth today is the physical demands of the
work
.
Firstly
,
this
 type of
work
 takes place outdoors where the weather can be extreme. Temperatures can get to 40 degrees in summer and below zero in winter, but
farmers
 must keep working.
Secondly
, being a farmer requires a huge amount of physical fitness.
Farmers
 should be able to carry heavy objects and do repetitive movements with strength for hours every day. Simply put, young
people
 today have easier jobs to choose from.
This
 is probably the reason why they are hesitant to
work
 in agriculture. There are some financial incentives that might bring more popularity among the younger. The
first
 one is scholarships where students who do not know what they want, or
people
 who do not have enough money to pay a student loan could see
this
 scholarship as an opportunity to find a better job. Another financial incentive is a tax deduction to buy new farms.
Therefore
, will be more
people
 interest in the farm business and be able to create more opportunities for the youth generation. With more money,
farmers
 could implement more automation in the fields. The young generation is more qualified to deal with technology than old
farmers
. To conclude,
although
 the youngest
people
 are uncertain to become
farmers
, farms are still a crucial service for every nation. The daily
work
 is hard, but with some financial incentives
this
 scenario could change, and more
people
 will be motivated to follow
this
 path.
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