In some countries, more and more people becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are reasons for this? How can people research this?

Nowadays, a
lot
of
people
with the help of researches trying to find more
information
about
history
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of their building or house that they live in.
Moreover
, it will help to know more about their living areas. In my opinion, there
are
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a
lot
of
history
, and
people
mostly use the Internet or books to find the
information
for
this
.
Firstly
, every house or
buildings
have their own fascinating
history
from the ancient years. In some countries have the biggest and the most beautiful
buildings
,
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but
in
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that time the oldest.
For example
, in the
Samarkand
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we can find a
lot
of old
buildings
and houses that
people
live in and they are very old
buildings
between about 19 and 20 centuries. I know one place, so when it
was build
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, I was not born, but my parents lived here.
However
, there
more
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information
that nobody knows about
this
place. Nowadays,
Internet
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is the most popular thing that can help to find out
information
about all things, and there are we can search out about their
history
.
However
, in
this
case, research using books or asking old
people
more
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advisable than
the
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using the Internet. When
people
ask the
history
about
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the place where they lived, it will help to better know about it.
Moreover
, there are a
lot
of books
of
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Kazakh authors about
buildings
, where they give a
lot
of valuable
history
. In conclusion, I want to say that the
history
that
people
find out from using the different research forms will go
to
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

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Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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