In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

One of the upcoming trends that got
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of
people
across the world interested
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looking up the
history
of the building they reside in. There are many different aspects when talking about historical
heritage
, The remains of our ancestors and how we can learn from them or the events in those time that still affects today. When
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can be done
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with the help of vast connected
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available on the
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that the
heritage
building of one country should be highly preserved and maintenance regularly since it is
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ancient construct that has
last
throughout the age. The reconstruction of ancient
heritage
can be costly and cannot completely
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the original since the construction material is quite different from our time.
Thus
, We need to do everything in our power to protect it so that it will continue throughout the ages. These preserved sites can
also
serve as
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for students and tourists
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are interested in
history
can learn the aesthetic architecture and the recorded
history
. For
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, In Thailand, A group of historians aim to preserve the
city
of Ayutthaya, The past capital
city
of Thailand. Unfortunately, the majority of the
city
was destroyed during the war with Khmer leaving it in
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state that cannot be longer reconstructed due to
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damage.
Therefore
, The ruins of
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prosperous
city
now stand as
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for Thai historic and a major tourists attraction point in Thailand. The stored archive of
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building
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can
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in
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way
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. But the most efficient one nowadays is through the
internet
. Since the introduction of
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, The
way
we conduct
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dramatically.
Instead
of going to the library and going through all the pages, some topics
such
as historic
heritage
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is
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resource and not being available in
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library. These old-fashioned
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constrains
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has been replaced by
people
sharing
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on the
internet
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of professors, magazines, journals or even youtube
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can be helpful and give you all the
information
you needed for
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purposes. To conclude, learning
history
about
heritage
is becoming more popular for
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of
people
. With the help of
internet
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,
Research
and studies can be done
way
easier than the old fashion
way
. Giving instant access to all
information
needed in
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of ebooks, video or photography.
This
lead to
people
better understanding the
history
of their country and the prestigious
heritage
across the world.
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  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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