Some people believe that the good leaders are born, whereas others hold the opinion that the leadership qualities could be obtained during the life. Who represents the good qualities indeed?

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Leadership
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quality is one of the key features in which a
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could be able to exaggerate self-esteem. While there are some who believe that it is a virtue that a
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receives inherently, others believe that a
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needs to wait throughout their lifetime expecting
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qualities
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. In my point of view, the
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who has profound
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leadership
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qualities
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is the latter one I mentioned above. In
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essay, I will explain why I agree with that with clear explanations. Many people are struggling with their teams or group of members with each other
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of not selecting a
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who has patience as a
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quality to lead them because all the members in the group or team will
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lead to a disastrous and unsuccessful position.
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, impatient leaders make sudden decisions and change them frequently as they are not patient enough to get decisions going through exact
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processes and get them right at once. Nobody can improve
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themselves. Everybody
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to develop
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qualities
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through their virtues along the time
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.
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, only ones with more experiences in their real
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tend to lead people better than other people who believed to be better from born.
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is because experiences inevitably lead to self-development through series of incidents and situations going throughout
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daily life. In conclusion, it is vague that a
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with a good
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quality entirely depends on
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personality skills and not on inheritance at all.
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