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Some people believe that the good leaders are born, whereas others hold the opinion that the leadership qualities could be obtained during the life. Who represents the good qualities indeed?

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Leadership
 quality is one of the key features in which a
person
 could be able to exaggerate self-esteem. While there are some who believe that it is a virtue that a
person
 receives inherently, others believe that a
person
 needs to wait throughout their lifetime expecting
that
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that quality
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qualities
. In my point of view, the
person
 who has profound
of
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leadership
qualities
 is the latter one I mentioned above. In
this
 essay, I will explain why I agree with that with clear explanations. Many people are struggling with their teams or group of members with each other
as a result
 of not selecting a
person
 who has patience as a
leadership
 quality to lead them because all the members in the group or team will
consequently
 lead to a disastrous and unsuccessful position.
For instance
, impatient leaders make sudden decisions and change them frequently as they are not patient enough to get decisions going through exact
decision making
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 processes and get them right at once. Nobody can improve
qualities
 from
born
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 themselves. Everybody
need
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 to develop
such
qualities
 through their virtues along the time
accordingly
.
On the other hand
, only ones with more experiences in their real
lifetime
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 tend to lead people better than other people who believed to be better from born.
This
 is because experiences inevitably lead to self-development through series of incidents and situations going throughout
the
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daily life. In conclusion, it is vague that a
person
 with a good
leadership
 quality entirely depends on
the
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personality skills and not on inheritance at all.
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