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A lot of young people do not know how to manage their money when graduating from high school. What do you think are the reasons? What can be done to teach them this important skill?

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Finance
management
 is one of the most crucial parts of people's lives. If a question about
money
management
 in students is addressed, it will be challenging for us to make a decision. Some people are firm believers in the importance of
management
skills
 in children. Others,
however
, have shown intense devotion to that argument.
This
 essay will examine the reason why the young generation can not manage
money
 and will discuss how to improve in
this
 skill. The
first
 and most obvious reason is their parents spoil their kids. The rationale behind
this
 is that parent will support for financial problems, if their children ask for. As the result, they will use to it and don't try to manage the
money
 by themselves. According to local university research, it indicates that 60% of the real reason that kids ask for more
money
 is
because
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that
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 they want to buy new games or toys. As the result, they don't learn how to collecting and managing
wage
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wages
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. Moving to how to teach these
skills
, the potential of which is that limiting their budget so they can learn how to manage the budget. Despite being not enough
money
, children have to know how to make
money
 by themselves.
Therefore
 they can learn the greatest lesson of their life.
However
, parents ought to be their guardian who looks after them and suggest the solution if they facing problems. In conclusion, students can learn a lot of
skills
 from school
however
 there are some
skills
 that parents should be involved
such
 as
money
management
. From my perspective, students should learn
this
 skill which will be useful for their future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial literacy
  • real-world applications
  • consumer culture
  • credit facilities
  • financial independence
  • practical financial literacy
  • manage finances
  • financial responsibility
  • money management
  • financial planning
  • tailored
  • accessible
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