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some people say that educational success depends most of the time on having a good teaching, other says attitude of students also matters. discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #success #time #attitude #students #matters
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Successful in education is mostly
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 on having
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good teaching, whereas, some individuals say that
students
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'
attitude
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 significant. In my point of view, it is undeniable that having an excellent
teacher
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 can lead the
students
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 to their goal easily,
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, the
attidude
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attitude
 of the
students
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 are
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 very important too, as if the
students
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 do not
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 attention to their
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, they will not earn anything.
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 and the formest, it is true that
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attitude
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 of
students
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are
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 significant due to the fact that the most important thing that will make
students
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success
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 in their studies is to make
students
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 have an interest in the
topic
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 they are teaching, if the
students
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already
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 interested in the
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, it will take no afford to make them understand.
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, having kids who are interested in studying will be less complex to make
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 educated.
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, even though, the
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 I have mentioned might be likely to say that it is
students
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responsbility
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responsibility
,
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, teachers can make them interested in the
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 too ! Due to the fact that teachers can
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 make
students
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 focus on the
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,
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 if they know how children want to learn; since
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teacher
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are
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 staying with their
students
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 almost one-
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 of a day, they should know how their
students
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 want to learn; so, they can make the most appropriate way to teach their
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.
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,
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teacher
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the teacher
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 is
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 the main
charater
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character
 that will make children more educated. To conclude, it is debatable that
wheter
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whether
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teacher
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 or childrens'
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attitude
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attitudes
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 are more important to make their life
success
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. In my point of view, they are both significant.
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