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The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh theq disadvantages?

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At present to think
life
 without readily available
meals
 is not less than a horrible dream,the development and growth of convenient food have become an inseparable part of today's
life
 which helps in meeting the fast pace of modern lifestyle,l would like to discuss pros and cons of
this
 trend in details in
this
 essay. One can find Fast food restaurants at every
second
 intersection which are ready with a wide range of menu to cater all kind of individuals who don't have
time
 to prepare
meals
 at home or in other hand wants to maintain a balance between job and
life
 by saving
time
 from the kitchen.In order to keep up ,
balance
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 has become a necessity of
life
, as grab a burger from the drive-through and keep going from job to home or vice versa. Readily available
foods
 are high in sugar, fat and salt content which adds cravings for
such
foods
,but these ingredients make them unhealthy in long run.All the
time
such
 high-density
meals
 give rise to obesity and other cardiovascular diseases,
such
foods
 are
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open invitation to illnesses.High spices in the fast-food chains give stomach upset and other gastrointestinal problems. In ,summary of course fast
foods
 saving
time
 and effort of preparing
meals
 and make modern fast-moving
life
 quite easy and manageable but they are bringing with them health-related troubles so one should try to exercise balance between
this
 aspect of
life
 for a healthy, wealthy and happy
life
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience foods
  • Modern lifestyle
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Time-saving
  • Easy
  • Wide variety
  • Convenient
  • Busy individuals
  • Food waste
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