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In the future, self-driving cars will replace human drivers. Is that a positive or negative development?

#future #cars #drivers #development
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The drivers will not be necessary to operate future vehicles because they will be driven by themselves. In my
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 it is
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 advantage for all of us because
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 development will let people ability to concentrate on more important and complicated things.
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, there could be some negative effects from
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 innovation.
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 improvement.  On the one hand, driving a car takes a lot of
time
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 every day especially for those who live in big cities and spend a few hours per day to get to a job.
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whay
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what
why
 self-driving automobile is essential for them.
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, a friend of mine lives in one of the largest
city
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 in Ukraine and uses his
time
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 on the way to
work place
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workplace
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 managing questions with a laptop
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 of sparing
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 unproductively. In short,
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 technology
alllows
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allows
 us to use vehicles and deal with personal tasks at one
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.
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, lots of professional drivers will lose their jobs.
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, the situation on the road will be controlled by machines which, as we know, sometimes are not as reliable as
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 experienced person.
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, scientists from the vehicle industry consider that people
shoud
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should
 pay attention to the road even if they have
autopilot
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an autopilot
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 system on their car in order to avoid emergencies.
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 turning into
self-driving
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a self-driving
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set-up
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setup
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 might be dangerous for humans. In conclusion,
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self-driving technology will bring lots of advantages in our
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lives
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life
lifes
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lives
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 and help us use
time
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 more profitably.
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, society can be
hurmed
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harmed
 by some disadvantages of that innovation.
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