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Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

#people #information #research #business #world
Nowadays,
people
 have many topics to debate. In that, the noticeable one is, about revealing the research
evidences
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 to
public
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. Because, a set of folks argue that, it is necessary to announce the
information
 to
people
.
On the contrary
, few others opine that
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 it is not needed to inform
to
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the
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society. But in my personal opinion, I strongly believe that it is mandatory to
upadate
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update
 the recent happenings in the globe to the community.
This
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views in detail in the following paragraphs.
To begin
 with, sharing the ideas of
research
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 field help to seek feedback and suggestions from experts. Perhaps,
this
 will be a real motivation to scholars.
Moreover
, in
business
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 the innovating ideas from the scientific platform assist to launch new products.
However
,
this
 can bring economic growth to the company. Apart from these,
by
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adding up to the minute
information
 in
curriculum
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 helps the students to drag the current world
in
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 their hands. To summarize, if a scientist shows repugnance to reveal his invention, it will not bring any economic developments to
nation
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.
On the other hand
, public
announcement
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 of
information
make
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people
 panic sometimes. To exemplify,
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 of nuclear energy can change the world, even though
people
 neglect it, because of the dangerous side-effect it can cause.
In addition
, the other reason to
with-hold
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information
 is patency concern.
Although
 it is the basic right of the inventor, he should make it accessible to the public
also
. To summarize, sometimes the citizens may get
scare
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 due to
universal
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 announcement of innovation.
Finally
, the
information
 shared help
the
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society to get up to date knowledge about the globe in all the necessary fields,
although
 it has some demerits. So, in my
point
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 it is good to update the innovations to
public
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the public
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.
Submitted by divyahemakumar2017 on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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