In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything they want if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

It is considered by some people that
children
should be reminded that they can get whatever they place their mind on if they
work
hard. In
this
essay, I will discuss the merits and demerits of
this
view.
To begin
with, some individuals think that telling
children
about achieving their goals if they try hard enough is a positive trend because it makes them strive for the best relentlessly.
That is
, when youngsters grow up with
this
mindset, they tend to be less discouraged by setbacks and
work
hard to get the goal. A real-life example is the former president of Nigeria, Professor Good luck Jonathan who said that from his childhood he has always been told that he can be a leader if he wants and because of his perseverance, he got to the top.
Therefore
, it is good for
children
to be constantly told about their dreams and the role of hard
work
.
On the other hand
, a disadvantage of
this
trend is that youngsters put themselves under unnecessary pressure in the quest to attain their goals.
That is
to say, having the mindset that hard
work
brings, they tend to think they are not trying enough when they are unsuccessful
hence
, they become pressured and
this
leads to them going into various unhealthy means to get success.
For example
, youths these days are told that with hard
work
, one is supposed to become a millionaire and because they haven't become one at a ripe age, they go into cybercrime in other to live up to their expectations.
This
means that making kids grow with that thought may be harmful to themselves and to society at large. To conclude, passing the message to
children
that they can achieve whatever they want by working hard is good because it makes them strive more,
although
,
this
can turn out to be a drawback when kids get pressured and venture into immoral acts.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • achieve
  • try hard
  • positive mindset
  • self-belief
  • motivates
  • ambitious goals
  • resilience
  • determination
  • confidence
  • self-esteem
  • growth mindset
  • unrealistic expectations
  • disappointment
  • failure
  • effort
  • hard work
  • seek support
  • individual differences
  • abilities
  • capabilities
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