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Increasing number of students are going to university instead of working after high school. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage for young people who do this.

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The trend of taking higher studies is quite popular among high school students rather than starting work right after
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 pass out. Some people think that it is more beneficial for them to pursue tertiary education while others hold
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opposite view to
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 phenomenon before draw the
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negative
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. To commence with, the very
first
 thing that pushes high school graduates to join universities
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 the competition in the job market; they are not confident enough to face their competitors without having superior degrees.
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, tertiary knowledge enables them to stand out
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 their contemporaries as they
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could
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 a better set of skills that they acquire in their educational institutes.
Secondly
, some professions demand superior degrees in order to secure
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 in the field.
For instance
, teachers must hold
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 diplomas along with some set of skills to get a post;
otherwise
, they are not even allowed to be
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appeared
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 in the competitive exams without holding a higher degree. Apart from that, most
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graduates
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 are teenagers and hard working conditions like work on the sites or on the floor might not be suitable for them; they could feel demotivated while working with
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 workforce because of
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 skill sets that,
otherwise
, they could gain by pursuing secondary disciplines. To conclude
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, no doubt, nowadays, many youngsters opt for
further
 studies than do work as it would be more fruitful for them to secure
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 competitive world.
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