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Many students today may study abroad for a part or for all of their course. Although studying abroad has many benefits for the individual student, it also has a number of disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

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Higher
education
 in abroad universities is a growing trend nowadays. Many
people
 believe that overseas
education
 has its disadvantages.
Although
the
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foreign study is not advisable for some
people
 with personal and financial problems, I agree it is a great deal of
experience
 for others. Studying in a foreign
country
 has a number of benefits. One can
experience
 the immersion in a
culture
 that leads to the development of interpersonal and professional skills. Students meet native speakers and they tend to practice their listening and speaking skills on an everyday basis which poses a great improvement in their linguistics.
Additionally
, they get a chance to meet several
people
 which will later turn into some useful professional contacts.
For instance
, A recommendation from a well-reputed person from abroad adds weightage to our resume professionally when we try to bag an opportunity in a multi-national firm. Like two sides of a coin, overseas
education
also
 has its dark side. Some financially unstable
people
 suffer a lot to adjust to the economic
culture
 of the
country
. Change of food cuisines
also
 affects most of the immigrated students which results in some serious health issues.
Moreover
, when students fly from their hometown to abroad for studies, they
experience
 a
culture
 shock which pushes them into depression and anxiety. Many studies have cited that over 30% of Indian who fly abroad
experience
 a
culture
 shock and returns after discontinuing their
education
. In conclusion, overseas
education
 is a very good platform for professional development as we get a lot of professional contacts in the
country
 but at the same time, one should pre-assess themselves whether they can sustain all the difficulties that a different
country
 poses on them.
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