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Many students today may study abroad for a part or for all of their course. Although studying abroad has many benefits for the individual student, it also has a number of disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

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Higher
education
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 in abroad universities is a growing trend nowadays. Many
people
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 believe that overseas
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 has its disadvantages.
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foreign study is not advisable for some
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 with personal and financial problems, I agree it is a great deal of
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 for others. Studying in a foreign
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 has a number of benefits. One can
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 the immersion in a
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 that leads to the development of interpersonal and professional skills. Students meet native speakers and they tend to practice their listening and speaking skills on an everyday basis which poses a great improvement in their linguistics.
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, they get a chance to meet several
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 which will later turn into some useful professional contacts.
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, A recommendation from a well-reputed person from abroad adds weightage to our resume professionally when we try to bag an opportunity in a multi-national firm. Like two sides of a coin, overseas
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 has its dark side. Some financially unstable
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 suffer a lot to adjust to the economic
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 of the
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. Change of food cuisines
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 affects most of the immigrated students which results in some serious health issues.
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, when students fly from their hometown to abroad for studies, they
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 a
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 shock which pushes them into depression and anxiety. Many studies have cited that over 30% of Indian who fly abroad
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 a
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 shock and returns after discontinuing their
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. In conclusion, overseas
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 is a very good platform for professional development as we get a lot of professional contacts in the
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 but at the same time, one should pre-assess themselves whether they can sustain all the difficulties that a different
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 poses on them.
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