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wastes created by three distinct companies (company A, company B and company C) from 2000 to 2015 are you agree

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The line chart illustrates how much wastes was created by three distinct
companies
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 (
company
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 A,
company
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B
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 and
company
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C
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) from 2000 to 2015. The unit was measured by the ton. Overall, both
companies
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 A and
B
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 experienced a downward trend, while
company
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C
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 showed an upward trend throughout the
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.
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,
company
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C
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 became higher than
companies
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 A and
B
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 near the end of the
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. In 2000, A number of wastes produced by
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 A hit the highest point at 12
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 and
company
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B
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 was around 8
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.
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, waste from
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B
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 increased sharply to about 10
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 whereas
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 A declined gradually to under 12
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 in 2005.
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, the figure represented a dramatic decrease of both
companies
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 between 2005 and 2015. The amounts of waste collected from
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C
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 started at above 3
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 at the beginning of the
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, it steadily rose to approximately 10
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 over the
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 and it outpaced the
companies
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 A and
B
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 in 2010 and 2014 respectively.
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