Some people believe that modern technology encourages more sociable behaviour. Others say that this leads to lesser sociable behaviour. Discuss both views with examples and provide your opinion.
The is no doubt that
technology
is giving new way for people
keeping
in touch with their friends and family by using Change the verb form
to keep
Internet
. Add an article
the Internet
This
phenomenon is offering manifold benefits to people
, while it also
bringing some disadvantages, such
as less
social with others. The following paragraphs will analyze both Add a missing verb
being less
of
views and give my opinion.
On the one hand, the various social media applications, Change preposition
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for
example
Facebook, Facetime, Add the comma(s)
,example
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are the
the
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apply
those
apps which provide the functions that give Correct determiner usage
apply
people
online chats and online interviews. Although
many international student
leaving own country for studying, he or she still can use related websites or applications to in touch other Change to a plural noun
students
people
whom they would love to despite they do not stay the same nation. It is clear that anyone won't be limited by time or space, it can easier communicate with others.
On the other hand
, the
negative side, Change preposition
on the
the
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apply
technology
also
can pose a threat to people
's socal
skills, Correct your spelling
social
for
instance
communication and interpersonal skills. The main reason is they do not understand how do they do during the conversation. It would cause Add the comma(s)
,instance
people
give
up Add the particle
to give
interactive
with each other in real life. Replace the word
interacting
Finally
, it can lead to con-social behaviours in the real world. Another fact can be seen is people
preference
using the Replace the word
prefer
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products to contact business clients or relatives rather than using Correct your spelling
electronic
face-to-face
method because it is not only more Add an article
the face-to-face
convience
to connectCorrect your spelling
convenience
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
do not waste of time.
In conclusion, the changes of
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in
technology
is
necessary for society, it Change the verb form
are
improve
the quality of our living. The most Change the verb form
improves
improtant
is Correct your spelling
important
people
should know the pros and cons when they using the new technology
, and remember the new technology
just decrease the inconvience
issues in our life, it Correct your spelling
inconvenience
do
not represent can solve all of the problems we meet.Change the verb form
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