Some of the way in which humans are damaging the environment .what can government do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

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The universe is always a mysterious thing to humans. Science and technology have highly developed
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there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deem that the government to spend more money for looking life on other planets while
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emphasize that it is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth that government should address. Apparently, various factors make a section of people advocate that authorities should expand their budget to find a new way of living on other planets and they have many reasons to substantiate it. The
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and foremost reason is related to recent research which is based on the hypothesis only that one day
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will collapse and humans should move to another planet for
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livings. Another research said that there are life existing possibilities out of Earth which make scientists curious about finding life or species over there and make
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with them.
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, some believe that it is a waste of people assets while there are so many issues on the earth that management can take
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to fix them. Chiefly, there is a lot of poverty around us and more than 70% population of the
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belt, even they could not get
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freshwater to drink these issues needed to be addressed on higher priority.
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lots of places are not discovered yet as well as lots of myth unsolved like Eygpt Pyramids construction still an open challenge for modern
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developers. in my profound opinion, it is supreme to discover
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universe but we should not ignore basic problems
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which is far more important.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deforestation
  • biodiversity loss
  • air pollution
  • climate change
  • water pollution
  • water scarcity
  • waste generation
  • improper disposal
  • overconsumption
  • resource depletion
  • government regulation
  • enforcement
  • renewable energy
  • sustainable practices
  • environmental regulations
  • environmental fines
  • education
  • awareness campaigns
  • individual responsibility
  • reduce
  • reuse
  • recycle
  • conserve
  • public transportation
  • carpooling
  • eco-friendly businesses
  • advocate
  • collaboration
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