These days Internet –based courses have become a popular alternative to University – based courses. Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures. Others argue that it is important to study at university. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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point of

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, especially since pandemic, online courses is one of the solutions which given by

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to replace

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to

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learning. The question

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rise, should the

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attend

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type of

lectures

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permanently even after the pandemic

over

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or should they come back to

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I will cover

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pros and cons of each

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and summarize them based on my thinking. Website-based learning offers more advantages for

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of

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the

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and the lecturers in

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of the

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of their learning process.

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, online lectures will help

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parties to spend less

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in the preparations. By having the activities in their own home, unlike with the offline learnings, it will reduce the

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time

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to

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.

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, the remaining

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could be

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for other important things

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as reading the materials and preparing the tasks.

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, internet-based courses allow the

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and lecturers

joining

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the program from any

places

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they want

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so that they could continue their program while still spending more

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with their

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. Research suggested that people with more family support will have

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grade

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in their education compared to the people with less support.

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the other hand, classroom-based learning is not all negative, it

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brings positive impacts to the pupils.

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type

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will boost

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of the

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because they will get more attention they need from the lecturer in the

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to

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meeting compared with the online one.

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, they will have more social interactions with their fellow classmates which can

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boost their learning spirit. Another reason that could benefit the parties from

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the offline

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course is that it is independent

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internet coverage and gadget utilization.

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with low access

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the internet or sophisticated gadget will still

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to follow the

proceses

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process

processes

well.

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online and offline lectures have their own advantages and disadvantages. So, it is important that the

university

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could give choices to the

students

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and lecturers whether or not they would proceed

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educational program with internet-based courses based on their own assessment of their needs.