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Write an essay of about 250 words to answer the following question “Why do you want to become a student of Foreign Language School for The Gifted?

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Participating in Foreign
Language
School
 for The Gifted is what my dream is all about. Since my
first
 visit to the
school
, I instantaneously fell in love with it, and after learning about its curriculum and extracurricular activities, I have come to the conclusion that Foreign
Language
School
 for The Gifted is undoubtedly the place where I spend my high
school
 days. As the name has spoken everything, it is easy to reckon the aim of the
school
 is to attract students with the love of foreign
language
.
Therefore
, it is no exaggeration to confidently state that the education quality in
this
school
 in the field of
language
 is by far the best in Hanoi. With unmatchable teachers, I can easily take full advantage of obtaining a new
language
. The
school
also
 has foreign facilitators, whom I can interact ,
therefore
 enhance my communication and my speaking skills.
Furthermore
, the teaching methods here are unlike the other schools. Students are encouraged to express themselves, their individualities and are creative in learning by self-studying, doing researches, involving in a group project and so on. Since I am an extrovert, I would love to participate in no scholastic activities. With abundant clubs in different fields from sports, arts to science, it will be the perfect place for
such
 an active person. Engaging in extra activities not only boosts my confidence and self-esteem but
it
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also
 gives me a chance to make acquaintance with other peers and develop my social skills. I love
this
school
 from the bottom of my heart. One day, I will introduce myself as a Foreign
Language
School
 for The Gifted student.
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