A friend is planning to visit the town where you live. Write a letter to make some suggestions about The best time to visit your town The most interesting places to check out Where to find inexpensive accommodation
Dear Maninder,
I hope
this
letter finds you in the best of spirits and radiant health. Yesterday, I got your letter and I am thrilled and excited to know that you are planning a visit to Manali. Therefore
, I am writing this
letter to give you a few suggestions about the trip.
Firstly
, it would be great if you can
plan your visit Wrong verb form
could
in
the month of DecemberChange preposition
for
,
because Remove the comma
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then
you would be able to witness fresh snowfall, which is one of the main attractions for the
visitors and you can see scenic beauty at its best.
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Secondly
, there are a number of places to visit. First,
the Atal Tunnel,
is the most visited tourist attraction. Remove the comma
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Second,
the Solang Valley,
is famous for its winter sports activities. Remove the comma
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Lastly
, the heritage market in Old Manali,
is the perfect place to buy things like woollen garments, dry fruit etc.
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Thirdly
, in order to, get a low budget place to stay you can consider Old Manali, because here you can easily book a travel hostel and shared accomodations
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accommodation
This
will definately
help you to plan a Correct your spelling
definitely
budget friendly
trip. I hope Add a hyphen
budget-friendly
this
information is helpful to you and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours lovingly,
Jatinder.Submitted by mrsdns on
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Although the letter is very well-structured overall, providing a little more specific detail about the accommodation options, such as names or examples, could enhance clarity.
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Excellent greeting and closing that add a personal touch to the letter.
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Your response includes all the requested information and a bit more, which is wonderful for achieving the task effectively.
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The writing tone remains friendly and courteous throughout, fitting perfectly for a letter to a friend.