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People buy a product if it fulfills their needs; there is no need for advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

#people #product #advertisement
In the advanced ,era
advertisements
 distribute motive as individuals purchase produces
products
 according to their needs. I completely disagreed with
this
 statement.
Advertisements
 provide information on new
products
 upcoming in markets. In my ,opinion the former appears to be more rational. I will
further
 explain about
advertisements
 how to choose better
products
 and
thus
 will lead to a logical conclusion. Commencing with, the
first
 and foremost reason
advertisements
 help to create awareness about new and upgraded
products
 in the market.
Moreover
,
advertisements
also
 guiding the consumer to update about the variety of stuff available in the markets at affordable prices.
In addition
 to
this
,
advertisements
 make the product a higher position in the market. For ,instance
advertisements
 helped light to promote any type of business to the broad scope of
consumers
.
Similarly
,
advertisements
 giving a chance to new companies to sell their product to unknown
consumers
 and gives popularity to the company.
Secondly
,
advertisements
 are more beneficial for sellers and
consumers
. Sellers can promote their goods and services.
Consumers
 can know all the information about the brand and which per cent off in the market.
Furthermore
, through ,
advertisements
 every company gave strength to our brand. it
also
 helps businesses to build brand identification. To recapitulate, according to the arguments mentioned above, one can reach a conclusion but I can agree with the belief that
advertisements
 do not serve any purpose. It plays a significant role in society by helping companies create more awareness in
consumers
 among the
products
.
Hence
, it is promoted by all means.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • awareness
  • functionality
  • existence
  • potential customers
  • demand
  • features
  • benefits
  • purchase decisions
  • perceived value
  • necessity
  • brand image
  • product perception
  • differentiate
  • crowded market
  • persuade
  • emotional responses
  • connection
  • multiple options
  • word-of-mouth
  • social media influence
  • marketing campaigns
  • positive word-of-mouth
  • inform
  • drive purchase decisions
  • superior
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