Last week, you celebrated your birthday with some friends in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed yourselves very much. Write a letter to the restaurant. In your letter mention the food and service explain that you really enjoyed the atmosphere suggest any improvements to make things better
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to thank you for providing your best services during my birthday celebrations last
week at your restaurant. We had a great time at your place.
I especially need to mention the food and service. All items on the buffet menu were fresh and delicious. Your staff quickly refilled all the delicacies as it got over. The BBQ and cocktails counters were faster and tastier.
Also
, I must appreciate the live music band. Initially
, I thought the music crew was a bit older; however
, they proved me wrong. They kept the evening atmosphere vibrant and enjoyable. They also
politely accommodated all guest's song requests.
My suggestions for any improvement would be on the price and adding an outdoor seating area to make things better. I found the bar menu to be on the higher side. If this
can be slightly reduced, then
it could be welcoming for many guests. Also
, an outdoor seating area will be enjoyed by couples as they may enjoy privacy and a quiet place.Submitted by msrinivas7866 on
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task achievement
To take your letter to the next level, you could consider expanding a bit more on the suggestions for improvements, providing specific examples or ideas that could be implemented.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph is tightly focused on a single idea. The paragraph discussing the live music band partially diverges by introducing initial misgivings, which could be addressed separately.
task achievement
The letter maintains a consistent and suitable writing tone, making it very polite and appreciative, which is appropriate for the context.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear logical structure, with a greeting, an introduction, body paragraphs, and a closing, making it easy to follow.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph overall focuses on distinct points: food and service, atmosphere, and suggestions, which contributes to overall coherence.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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