If people go to live in another country they should follow the customs and traditions of the new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The way immigrants adapt to the
traditions
of a new
country
is a matter that always arises some levels of discussion. While many people believe the newcomers should strictly follow local customs, others deny any sort of moral obligation and support the idea of cultural diversity. In my opinion, as long as there is
mutual
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respect there is no reason to force
foregins
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foreign
foreigners
to obey all the local rules. From dressing codes to
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meals, there are
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hundreds
of aspects that are involved in a
country
's cultural
inheritage
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heritage
. If someone goes to live abroad, adapting to local rules can be a challenge.
However
, for many
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it is important that everyone respects their culture,
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when it comes to religion and morality.
For example
, in
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countries
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it can be
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immensely
intensely
insulting for a woman to show her heir, shoulders or knees.
Therefore
, when it comes to public spaces, it is important to respect the rules no matter what the personal background is.
On the other hand
, immigration is quite a sensible phenomenon and people who leave their countries need to maintain their own
traditions
as they constitute a pillar of their identity.
For instance
, it is common to see how
foreigs
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foreign
foreigners
look for compatriots to share meals or spend special holidays together.
This
is a way of keeping their culture alive even though they are not anymore in their home
country
. As long as there is mutual respect between everyone, there is no reason to believe why different
traditions
should not coexist in peace. In conclusion, cultural diversity is a challenge that
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not only newcomers
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a
country
but
also
the local community. Respecting the most sensible aspects of the nation's culture is something immigrants should have in mind, but their right to follow their own
traditions
should
also
be encouraged.
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,
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diversity and
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coexistence
could bring many educational benefits and help to
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increase
tolerance towards
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others.
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