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Some people encourage young children to leave their parents house as soon as they become adults while others say children should stay at their parent’s house as long as possible. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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It is argued that youngsters should move out of their
parents
 and guardians homes when they reach a certain age of adulthood,
however
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 others have a contradicting
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. While
,
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 it is true that the family should stay together to acquire emotional and financial
support
 and feel less lonely,
however
, teenagers become more independent if they leave their
parents
 home early. On the one hand, If children's stay with their
parents
 as long as it is
convienent
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convenient
 , it helps both the parent and child to get emotional and financial
support
 and cause
less
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depression problems.
This
 is to say that, humans are sensitive in nature and require each other in order to survive and grow in life. Family members are the only one's whom they can look upon in their bad and good times to
recieve
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receive
support
 financially or emotionally.
Moreover
, staying together fosters love and respect to be maintained .To illustrate, recent research by the 'Cambridge
University'
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 showed that the people living with their family are more
cheerfull
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cheerful
 and full of life in comparison to individuals living an independent lifestyle.
On the other hand
, teenagers
does
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 become more responsible and independent if they start living alone at an early age .
This
 is because, when they
recieve
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receive
received
 no
support
 financially from their
parents
, they ought to work and earn themselves.They in turn realize the value of money and learn how to be more organised in spending finances .
Moreover
, they tend to work much harder in order to live a good lifestyle. To exemplify, a recent study by the 'The Times of India' showed that
the
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51% of the people are more successful because they left their
care taker's
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 home at an adult age. To conclude,
although
 families who
stays
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 together, eats together is much more emotionally and financially stable, I strongly agree with the
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 that youngsters become more
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 and responsible if they leave their parent's home early.
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