The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities close. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In the future, all virtuals

shops

in the urban and countryside will diminish because of increased wired shopping through the internet. I completely disagree with the above-stated line.

This

essay will discuss both views with prominent instances.

First

of all, nowadays, most of the populace is using the internet for their household items, clothes, personal hygiene things, etc.

For instance

, the research said that from the past two years on wars online shopping users lists have increased to 30%.

Secondly

this

type of shopping site offers a lot of discounts on all products.

Although

online products are not in good condition, individuals tend to prefer online sites for their needs.

For example

, there are many cites offers major discount sales like Amazon, Flipkart, Nykaa, Myntra, etc. overall, local

shops

will be decreased because of these things,

on the other hand

, people in the countryside do not prefer shopping via the internet. They always do shopping in local

shops

and local markets. To illustrate

this

, in my native place nobody shows any interest to do shopping online.

Lastly

, native

shops

are offering fresh items with plausible prices,

moreover

, society can bargain

also

. when it comes to online, we can not bargain, because those are fixed rates. people will definitely change their interest in offshore shopping. To conclude

this

, as far as I believe, the populace will definitely turn to native shopping

instead

of online shopping in future.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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11Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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