Even though globalization affects the world’s economies in a positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.
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globalization
has led to substantial economic Use synonyms
growth
and created numerous job opportunities in developing Use synonyms
countries
, it is important to note its negative impact on society. Use synonyms
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issue will be clearly presented in the essay below.
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countries
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globalization
was introduced. It is Use synonyms
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important to mention that when tax rates are low and labour costs are low, it can be detrimental to developing Linking Words
countries
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such
as India, China, and South Africa, which are embroiled in war and have had difficulties with economic Linking Words
growth
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when foreign companies relocate to these Remove the comma
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countries
. Due to Use synonyms
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particular wave of investment, underdeveloped Linking Words
countries
will be able to create a large number of new businesses. I believe that the decline in unemployment is largely due to increased productivity which results from Use synonyms
globalization
on Use synonyms
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, Linking Words
globalization
has not led to an increase in business positions, rather it has simply shifted the job opportunities from developed to developing Use synonyms
countries
. In which case, Use synonyms
this
phenomenon leads to a high rate of unemployment in the USA while China anticipates high employment Linking Words
growth
in the upcoming year. Use synonyms
As a result
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globalization
, nations are Use synonyms
also
more interconnected, but they are Linking Words
also
more dependent on each other as well, so if one nation has a weak economy, it is very likely that the economics of others will Linking Words
also
be adversely affected. Linking Words
As a result
of the global economic crisis of 2008, Linking Words
this
dependent relationship among nations negatively affected the global economy.
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globalization
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countries
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growth
and Use synonyms
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market development, it is detrimental to industrialized Change the spelling
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite