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In some countries, men and women are having children late in life. What are the reasons for this development? Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?

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The six pie charts illustrate the
water
 usage in six areas of the world namely, North
America
, South
America
, Europe, Africa, Centra
Asia
, South East
Asia
 for different purposes( Industrial
use
, Agricultural
use
, Domestic
use
) in terms of percentages. Overall, North
America
 and Europe consumed a higher proportion of
water
 for Industrial
use
 and least for domestic
use
 along with South East
Asia
. Whereas
Agriculture
 was the highest priority among the other four countries and industrial
use
 was given the least priority except for South-East
Asia
. North
America
 used almost half of the
water
 percentage for industrial
use
, 39% for
Agriculture
, the rest for Domestic. In Europe, the usage follows the same trend with just above 50% for Industry, 32% for
Agriculture
 and remaining 15% for Domestic
use
. Coming to the rest of the countries,
Agriculture
 was given the utmost priority with 71% in South
America
, 81%, 84%, 88% in South-East
Asia
, Africa, Central
Asia
 respectively. South
America
 used 19% and 10
%
of
water
 for Domestic and Industrial
use
 respectively. Africa and Central
Asia
 followed a similar trend with 9%, 7% and 7%, 5% for Domestic and Industrial
use
 respectively. South-East
Asia
 used 12% for industries and the remaining 7% for Domestic purposes.
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