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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree

#growth #shops #towns #cities
Although
 many people
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belive
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believe
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 that buying necessary things
through
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online has been resulted to shut the
doars
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doors
 of outlets in the urban areas, I think in
reverse
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 manner. To put it simply, I completely disagree with the given statement. Following
this
, my inclination is justified in the ensuing paragraphs below. Out of all the arguments of the topic, the strongest one to prove my view is reason one.
This
 is to say that most
of
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people
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the people
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 want to touch and feel the objects or things before
purchased
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 as well as they like to buy
most
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the most
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 suitable one for them. A good example to prove
this
 is that, if a lady
who
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wants to order a
sareefor
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saree for
saree
 her wedding , she surely
want
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 to observe the colours and patterns of the saree.
Besides
this
, it is
also
 true that
,
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 non of man do buy food and beverages
via
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online if there is not a critical reason like a pandemic or a
sivere
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severe
 injury. By
this
, I mean, men and
woment
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women
 use to buy fast food or other types of instance food from hotels by visiting them.
Moreover
, the other reason to prove my point is relaxing
mind
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the mind
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 by taking photos of
relavent
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relevant
 places to boost their fun. Because of outside
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shopping
showing
shoping
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 people give some break to their busy lifestyles.
In contrast
, there is a
trent
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trend
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 to organize
family
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a family
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 gathering, friends functions in a shop or
a hotels
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hotels
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 on the vacations. After the
function
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 they will upload those through social media to see the reactions of others and their comments. It leads to
long
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 term happiness of their minds.
Thus
, to wrap up the discussion, it can be said that online shopping is
must
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a must
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 thing in
day-to-day
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the day-to-day
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 life of human
being
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beings
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 to empower their social collaboration and happiness. To conclude my reasons, buying
this
 via outlets is necessary human need and for that shops should be open to customer all the days if
ther
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there
 is no critical happening around there.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • physical stores
  • online retailers
  • retail apocalypse
  • digital economy
  • consumer behavior
  • sustainability
  • commercial landscape
  • high-street
  • consumer trends
  • augmented reality
  • showrooms
  • carbon footprint
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