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Write an essay of about 250 words to answer the following question “Why do you want to become a student of Foreign Language School for The Gifted?

#“why #student #language #school
Nowadays, numerous students want to apply to Foreign
Language
School
 for The Gifted, so do I.
This
 essay will look at plenty of benefits of being a student of Foreign
Language
School
 for The Gifted. One of the main reasons is the chance to contact high-captivity quality teachers in each specialized subject. You will meet many great teachers and plenty of friends who are at the same level as you.
That is
 to say, your study environment will be better so you can have an interesting learning outcome.
Besides
, CNN has exciting attractive tuition
that is
 only 300.000 dong per month if you are in a specialized class.
Second
, CNN has modern facilities which is one of the most vital things. There is plenty of high-quality technology equipment that can help you study better.
Moreover
, its library has many kinds of books that you can read to widen your knowledge. And all
this
 equipment is to provide for your studying you with the best learning facilities.
Last
 but not least, Foreign
Language
School
 For The Gifted organizes many extra-curricular activities for students. There are many clubs
such
 as sports clubs, arts clubs, and so on.
Furthermore
, they
also
 have speech contests in foreign languages as well as many interesting proms. To recapitulate, Foreign
Language
School
 For The Gifted is one of the best high schools in Hanoi. Many students hope to win a place there, so I have to try my best to overcome all the competitors in
this
 competition.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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